#Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

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April 25, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes exhaustion. Who is exhausted and why? Can you make art of exhaustion? Go where the prompt leads!

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There isn’t enough hours in the day to do all that needs doing

I can’t afford a maid, I don’t have a rewind button

Although I could do with having one fitted

Maybe some new batteries, like the ones that keep the bunny running

Now I don’t have the strength to run, to hide just for a while

Sleep does not help much, I awake with a backache and sore feet

Head spinning with the thought of all that is yet to come

The day is full before I start

I can get through another one because of love…

AAAAA


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9 responses to “#Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry”

  1. Maybe the love is what keeps the bunny running? Hmmmmmm…. might be a poem in that!

    1. You could be right!

  2. I love the last line — better than batteries are the feelings of love.

    1. Always…

  3. Well done!

  4. The last line is the battery that keeps us keeping on. :-)

    1. Thank you, Diana…

  5. It is not easy juggling everything in life.

    1. That is so true… but we must battle on…

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