Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 127 #SynonymsOnly

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I

attend

Sunday church

my soul transcend

sins everywhere

the walls run thick with tears

heads bowed in silent prayer

seeking forgiveness given here

candle lit, penance paid, sins vanish

I chase my shadow across the Rubicon

The die is cast, whose favour will it fall

my soul hangs in balance of payment

I track the desert wilderness

I seek the one who can help

to return me from hell

call me from exile

the hunt over

my own guide

I live

now

AAAAA


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11 responses to “Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge”

  1. This is exceptional Anita!

  2. Anita, these double Etheree are definitely your word tool! Excellent emotions expressed and I loved how you could express how your religion lifts you up. Excellent!! <3

    1. Thank you, Colleen…

  3. Powerful poem, Anita. I was entranced.

    1. So glad to hear it, Diana…

  4. Well done!

    1. Thanks, Jacquie…

  5. This is beautifully written, Anita.

    1. Thank you, Robbie…

  6. I love how the double etheree leads to this intense middle section then calms back down to a finality in the short lines at the end! Wonderful religiosity, as well.

    1. Anita thanks you so much for your understanding…

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