#TankaTuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 293, #SpecificForm: Troiku
Looking for the light the true path the spark of life Looking for the light in the face of a stranger in the moment sitting still The true path stumbling over boulders finding the way The spark of life a hand reaching to hold you telling you it is all right ©AnitaDawes2022
Such an unusual poetry form from Colleen this week…
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This is so lovely and heartening! <3
~David
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On the spiritual path, the helping hands along the way are angels in disguise. Beautiful use of the form.
Thank you, msjadeli… this was our first troika, and we loved it…
You’re very welcome.
It doesn’t matter how independent we may be, a helping hand proves to be sweet when needed! Lovely piece, Anita!
Thanks Susi!
You’re welcome! :)
Anita, this is a beautiful Troiku sequence. I knew you would love this form. ❤️
and Anita enjoyed using it, Colleen…
That hand is always welcome.
Beautiful and great! Love the thoughts and also the metrics. Best wishes, Michael
Thank you, Michael…
consummate🤍
Lovely thoughts! I like the path that guides toward light though it lies within us.
Thank you, Balroop. glad you liked the poem…
I love this SO much! Great response to the prompt!
Thanks, Jan… very different, but fun to do…
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