#TankaTuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 293, #SpecificForm: Troiku
Looking for the light the true path the spark of life Looking for the light in the face of a stranger in the moment sitting still The true path stumbling over boulders finding the way The spark of life a hand reaching to hold you telling you it is all right ©AnitaDawes2022
Such an unusual poetry form from Colleen this week…
Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie 
This is so lovely and heartening! ❤
~David
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Love your thoughts here 💜
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On the spiritual path, the helping hands along the way are angels in disguise. Beautiful use of the form.
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Thank you, msjadeli… this was our first troika, and we loved it…
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You’re very welcome.
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It doesn’t matter how independent we may be, a helping hand proves to be sweet when needed! Lovely piece, Anita!
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Thanks Susi!
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Anita, this is a beautiful Troiku sequence. I knew you would love this form. ❤️
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and Anita enjoyed using it, Colleen…
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That hand is always welcome.
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Beautiful and great! Love the thoughts and also the metrics. Best wishes, Michael
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Thank you, Michael…
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Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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consummate🤍
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Lovely thoughts! I like the path that guides toward light though it lies within us.
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Thank you, Balroop. glad you liked the poem…
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I love this SO much! Great response to the prompt!
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Thanks, Jan… very different, but fun to do…
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