#FlashFiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community

March 11, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about deep wishes. Where is the deep — in the sky, the ground, or outer space? What kind of wishes reside there for whom and why?

Sitting in the middle of the field, mysterious in the moonlight, was a wishing well.
It wasn’t there yesterday; of that I am sure.
I mean, why would anyone build a well so far from a house?
Far from looking quaint and old worldly, it looked much too menacing for my liking.
I found myself drawn to it, but was my life really so bad, I needed to make a wish?
There were a few things I could wish for,
a proper home, a better husband, a baby…
If I only had to choose one, which would it be?

© Jaye Marie 2021


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11 responses to “#FlashFiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community”

  1. Isn’t it funny how we are taught to just make one wish when throwing a coin into a fountain, when we blow our bday candles, etc? The golden fish at least can grant THREE wishes. Why are we limiting our happiness like that?
    But you pose a great question – what would we choose if we could only have one. A reminder that we should count our blessings when we have more than some.

    1. These days, we are in danger of forgetting to ask those questions, and this prompt from Carrot Ranch brought that home to me…

  2. […] Deep Wishes by Jaye Marie […]

  3. I love the imagery that comes to life and tug of longing for what to wish for. Good to see you, Jaye!

    1. Thank you, Charli. Anita wasn’t up to it this week, and that wishing well worked its magic on me instead!

  4. Wow! What a beautiful challenge! May I please try this under my blog??

    1. Not sure what you mean…

      1. This 99 words challenge, where should I attempt it?? Can it be on my blog page??

        1. You are welcome to join the 99-word challenges at CarrotRanch.com/blog.

          1. Thank you Charli. Sure, will place it in CarrotRanch.com/blog.

        2. You should read all about it over on Carrot Ranch. It’s really easy!

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