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Double Down

The distant echo of your voice calling me home
      Across fields of new mown hay
I turn my head away, I do not want to go
       Your soft whisper follows, I feel your longing
I am not ready to take up an angelic post
       Snow white feathers would not suit me
Or God forbid, the other place where coal is needed
      Did I slip into a place where the forked one gave me a large spade?
I love you still, alas I have much to do
      All the things that frightened you, I understand
There are mountains to climb where you would not go
      Your fear of the unknown kept you locked inside
There are snow slopes calling, louder than your echo
       Do you now have eternity to roam?

© Anita Dawes 2021


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10 responses to “Double Down… A Very Unusual Poem”

  1. Deep and rich, Anita. I kept going back to it.

    1. Being confined to barracks is having a weird effect on all of us!

      1. ‘Weird’ can be sooo creative, Anita! 😎

        1. Apparently so…

  2. Three poems in one–well done, Anita!

    1. Thank you, Audrey. Can’t wait to see what Anita does next…

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    Gwen M. Plano

    Dear Anita, this is a powerfully beautiful poem. The imagery, the passion and longing, the back and forth, all — lovely. 💗

    1. Thanks Gwen. Anita has come up with something very special…

  4. Wow. Anita, this is beautiful. So heartfelt.

    1. Thank you…

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