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Who are you?

I hear the voice, as if someone walks one step behind me
The words unformed, the sound of an angry bee caught in a web
I turn, face the empty street
Keeping my voice low, I ask, who are you?
“I am your shadow, here inside you
Where no light shines.
Most of your life you have taken no notice of me
As if I don’t exist.”
My shadow is nothing more than a trick of the light
“You think so? I am here to tell you I can be free of you.
Let someone tread on your shadow, while you continue to walk away
You may feel lighter without me.
You will feel slower, your days will take longer to pass
Each time you allow someone to step on me
 A small part disappears
Soon I will be gone, you will miss me, wish me to return
This I will not do; I will have the freedom I seek…”

© anita dawes 2020


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6 responses to “Who Are You? #Poetry”

  1. I was trying to duck my shadow today while taking a photo. The solution was to step into another shadow. No one got their feeling hurt and the photo came out fine. Super poem, Anita.

    1. Like Peter Pan? Thank you, John…

      1. Exactly. 😂

  2. How mysterious. Do we really wish to be free of our shadows? Wonderful poem for musing.

    1. I think shadows are important, life would be odd without them…

      1. I agree. :-) It could be rather dull.

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