#FlashFiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

August 6, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about molten lava. It can be real-time, such as a volcanic event or the result of one in the geologic timeline. Or, think about making the prompt into a metaphor of heat. What is so hot? Go where the prompt leads!

The sudden hot blast as you take
hot cross buns from the oven
Balmy temperatures that drive most people
to the nearest beach
Looking at the sun through dark glasses
Reminding yourself it’s a ball of molten lava
Boiling seas of golden fantasies
Hot pavements, melting tarmac
Car tyres in danger of melting
(It has been known)
Desert sands, hot springs
Shooting geysers you cannot bathe in
Only admire the height it reaches
A falling star so hot
It melts sand into glass
The only heat I appreciate
Is between cool cotton sheets
Should I be telling you this?

©anitadawes 2020


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5 responses to “#FlashFiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry”

  1. Ah, I love the relief from the heat with a crisp cool mention of cotton sheets. Lovely shooting star kind of poem, Anita.

    1. Thank you, Charli!

  2. Ha! That ending was a hoot. Great imagery throughout, Anita.

    1. Just a bit naughty!

      1. Lol. :-)

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