#Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

July 9, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes that answers the question, who is Monreal Dorb. You can imagine the life of this fictitious person in any era or circumstance. Is there cause and effect at play? Go where the prompt leads!


Sparrow, a twelve-year-old urchin
living under an abandoned railway arch.
The one thing you remember about Sparrow
Is his midnight blue eyes
They look right through you.
You feel him searching for your inner most thoughts
Living on his wits, finding odd jobs to get by
He’ll clean your shoes, run errands.
One errand to the library almost cost him his life
When he ran into the street,
white as the ghost he just met
narrowly missing a hansom cab, horses flaring.
Clutching the book, he read the title
“Have you met Monreal Dorb, the library ghost?”

©anitadawes 2020


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8 responses to “#Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry”

  1. Good job on thinking outside the box with this one.
    After reading your piece I totally see a ghost of a baron from back in the day. Makes perfect sense. You’ve convinced me.

    1. Thank you for your wonderful comments, Sam…

  2. Its was different and interesting poem…good one anita…have a nice day

    1. Thank you, Sanjuna…

  3. This is clever, Anita, and very well written.

    1. Thank you, Robbbie…

  4. Oh, nice one, Anita!

    1. Really pleased you liked it, Charli!

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