#Flash Fiction 99 word Challenge for the Carrot Ranch Literary Community

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“Not All is Lost    99 words”

 

A burning rose lay on the hot desert sand, if not found, I would be next.

I lay there beneath the hot sun, waiting to burst into flame, the voices of the Bedouin tribe close by.

Hope still beat in my chest that someone would come looking for their daily water. Would they walk this way?

Buzzards circle overhead, waiting for a feast.

As I reach for the rose, my eyes beheld a child’s feet. All was not yet lost, she would go back to her people for help.

Much later, I would discover the child’s name was Rose…


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4 responses to “#Flash Fiction 99 word Challenge for the Carrot Ranch Literary Community”

  1. Moving post. Shared on social media. Have great day.

    1. Thank you Lizzie…

  2. This is very compelling.

    1. Thank you, Robbie…

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