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Counting dust particles in a sunbeam
Order made visible
Lack of concentration, the numbers slip
Look again, is the dust really there?
Invisible fingers touch the air
Searching the universe for the new, the unknown
Inside the dark space where stars are born
On into infinity, something is out there
Numbered by the Galaxies we spin in…


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7 responses to “Order made Visible… #Poetry”

  1. Loved this mystical poem, Anita. Beautifully penned. Order and chaos go hand in hand and somehow it all makes sense.

    1. Somehow, it really does, Diana…

  2. A moment of synchronicity… I was just writing a story involving chaos and order. Anyway, this is gorgeous. Thanks so much for sharing it. Hugs on the wing.

    1. Anita’s poem certainly had me thinking. Glad you liked it, Teagan…

  3. Deep and beautiful!

    1. a lovely comment, Jan. We thank you!

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