Did I just grab the tail end of a plane
As it took off?
Am I soaring high above the earth?
How or why I am doing this
I cannot tell
I should not be able to breathe
My body should freeze at this altitude
Yet the air feels soft, gentle
Helping me to hold on
It wants me here to witness
The earth below in all its glory
At the same time
To know how it feels
To be free of all restraints
The clouds brush against my skin
The soft touch of cotton wool
Childhood footsteps
run through my mind
reminding me of mother’s gentle touch
the air pulls me forward
old memories drift away
I can feel my soul rewriting my future
As I let go of the plane…

©anitadawes 2020


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16 responses to “Don’t Panic… Let Go!”

  1. I love the dreamlike quality of this poem.

    1. Thanks, Kim!

      1. It’s a pleasure.

  2. Hi Jayne, I just featured this post on my weekly feature here;
    https://wordeologist.wordpress.com/2020/08/15/the-saturday-symphony-6/

    1. Thank you, Jude!

      1. My pleasure 🌼

  3. […] Don’t panic, Let go by Anitadawes – Take an adventure in the clouds and glide on Anita’s sumptuous words. […]

  4. Yes, l would like to float as well. Thanks, Anita.

    1. I wonder if it would be any cooler up there…

      1. Oh yes. Get to 40,000 feet and you get a range of -40 F to -70F. Brrrrr

        1. From one extreme to another?

          1. It seems that way.

  5. Ahh, Beautiful and freeing.

    1. Glad you liked it, Jude…

  6. Wow. I love this. Beautiful poetry. The last line is stunning.

  7. Loved it, Anita. Float gently, land safely…

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