Which Is The Better Opening Line – And WHY?
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2 responses to “Which Is The Better Opening Line – And WHY?”
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[…] https://jenanita01.com/2017/10/27/which-is-the-better-opening-line-and-why/ I like: The drums silenced while the noose tightened around his neck. Less passive that way. […]
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As a reader, I like number 1, because it’s more descriptive.
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