Not sure if this is a short story or a poem, and Anita isn’t sure either…
I left my body on the train going home I float above, watching the conductor, shaking my shoulder, ‘Last stop! You need to step off, sir.’ I watch my body stretchered off the train. Following the ambulance, I am still attached to my body They try to revive my still form. I feel no pain. Darkness slams my floating form back into my body I awake, strange faces looking at me ‘You are very lucky, young man. We nearly lost you.’ I wait for one of them to mention the strange protrusion of waving light down my left side. No one said a word, neither did I, for fear of being thought mad I had the feeling that part of my floating form was out of line Over the next few days when speaking to strangers I could see what was about to happen to them I told one young couple they would win big on the lottery That they must give part of it to a charity, or their luck would turn bad I knew what would happen to them if they ignored my advice It wasn’t pretty. I started getting headaches and was told by a friend that my astral body was out of line Would this be my life from now on? I hoped my astral body could find a way to tuck itself back in Or was there some other reason I am walking through life with an astral glow down one side of my body… ©Anita Dawes2023
Wow, very intriguing. True story?
Very true…
A narrative poem perhaps. What ever it is, it’s good!
Thank you for that, Darlene…