Excerpt from Let it Go…

We hadn’t seen dad for nearly a week, and that was a long time, even for him.

Mum was going spare, ranting on about what she’d do to him when he finally came home. Poor dad, it could mean another black eye, or a nose which wouldn’t stop bleeding for hours after mum landed one of her punches. Pretty normal behaviour for my parents and had been going on for years. Considering my mother’s temper, you would think he would stop rolling home drunk and penniless, but he never did.

It was late Friday night when he finally came home. We knew it was him, even though it sounded as if something had been thrown at the front door. We listened to him fumbling with the key for ages; mum with arms folded, waiting for him to fall through it. How she controlled her temper and didn’t rush at the door and tear it from its hinges, I will never know. I think I would have done; it would have been quicker.

I heard the lock turn and dad swung in like a gust of storm wind, holding on to the key that was stuck in the lock. His dark, shaggy hair hadn’t seen a comb in days and his clothes appeared to have been slept in. He stood there swaying, grinning at mum like an idiot.

She slapped his hand from the key, sending him flying across the hall, skidding on the mat that never seemed to want to stay in one place. I had a ringside seat at the top of the stairs and watched as she calmly removed the key and slammed the door…


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9 responses to “Excerpt from Let it Go…”

  1. You paint such a vivid picture with your words, Anita. Well done.

    1. She really does, Diana…

  2. Let it Go is an excellent read. Wishing Anita many new readers and fans.
    And three cheers for organization!

    1. Thank you so much for your support, Mae. Means a lot!

  3. Three cheers for organization!!! … I’m hoping it’ll drop by our place some time soon! :D

    1. It might not be happy here, early signs are not promising, so could find its way to you !

      1. Heh, heh, heh. :D

  4. Reblogged this on firefly465.

  5. Oh-oh. This is physical abuse. What an excerpt!

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