This weeks prompt is “Fanny Hooe” a campsite with a lake in the US…
I think you would need more than 99 words to describe it properly!
The Bridge at Fanny Hooe
Last day of our holiday Dad said he’d like to drive to Lake Fanny Hooe.
After an hour’s drive, Tommy was still giggling about the name.
The lake was stunning, the bridge even more so.
Dad was here for the legend about the five kids who drowned after daring to jump from the bridge. Dad snapped away, hoping to catch a shot of them. Thing is he was missing the beauty. The grape design on the bridge was so beautiful.
Tommy slipped his hand in mine. ‘I can hear them, Alice. They’re laughing as they jump from the bridge.’
This story is more than chilling — you weave different perspectives to give it a full experience of the bridge which makes Tommy’s declaration stand out. Well done!
Glad you liked it, Charli!