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What do you see # 67 – February 1 2021

Image credit: Tim Hüfner @ Unsplash

( For the visually challenged reader, the photo shows a partially open gate, which is thrown in relief by a light filtering from a doorway)

I hide in the dark shadow.
Small, afraid of the light
Things I see in the dark
Feel familiar, safe.
Whispers, comforting.
Scratching, claws on wood
Remind me there is life outside.
The dark bars drawn by the light.
I think of the Tower of London.
Traitors Gate, prison bars
Being held by shadowy thoughts
Too many nameless things
To make me feel small.
To shrink further into darkness…

© Anita Dawes 2021


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  1. […] Jenanita; What do you see # 67 […]

  2. judeitakali Avatar

    Beautiful take, vivid

    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Thank you, Jude…

      1. judeitakali Avatar

        Always such a pleasure 🍁

  3. Sadje Avatar

    Oh wow, Anita! You’ve written so vividly and made the reader experience all these feelings of uncertainty and fear. Thanks for joining in my friend

    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      It was a disturbing image…

      1. Sadje Avatar

        I’m sorry that it had that effect.

        1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

          Please don’t apologise… writers need sensations like these!

          1. Sadje Avatar

            Thanks for understanding.

  4. Chris Hall Avatar

    That sent a shiver down my spine!

    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      The image did that to me too!

  5. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena.

  6. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Awesome lines

    Being held by shadowy thoughts
    Too many nameless things
    To make me feel small.
    To shrink further into darkness…

    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Thank you, Reena…

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