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What do you see # 67 – February 1 2021

Image credit: Tim Hüfner @ Unsplash

( For the visually challenged reader, the photo shows a partially open gate, which is thrown in relief by a light filtering from a doorway)

I hide in the dark shadow.
Small, afraid of the light
Things I see in the dark
Feel familiar, safe.
Whispers, comforting.
Scratching, claws on wood
Remind me there is life outside.
The dark bars drawn by the light.
I think of the Tower of London.
Traitors Gate, prison bars
Being held by shadowy thoughts
Too many nameless things
To make me feel small.
To shrink further into darkness…

© Anita Dawes 2021


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  1. What do you see # 67 – A Roundup – Keep it alive Avatar
  2. judeitakali Avatar

    Beautiful take, vivid

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Thank you, Jude…

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      1. judeitakali Avatar

        Always such a pleasure 🍁

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  3. Sadje Avatar

    Oh wow, Anita! You’ve written so vividly and made the reader experience all these feelings of uncertainty and fear. Thanks for joining in my friend

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      It was a disturbing image…

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        I’m sorry that it had that effect.

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        1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

          Please don’t apologise… writers need sensations like these!

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          1. Sadje Avatar

            Thanks for understanding.

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  4. Chris Hall Avatar

    That sent a shiver down my spine!

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      The image did that to me too!

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  5. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Awesome lines

    Being held by shadowy thoughts
    Too many nameless things
    To make me feel small.
    To shrink further into darkness…

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Thank you, Reena…

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