Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

The Crooked Path #Poetry

This poem is just a few hours old, and I am proud to post it here today.

It has been so long since my sister wrote anything new, I was beginning to think that part of our lives was over. I hope you enjoy The Crooked Path as much as I do!

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  1. John W. Howell Avatar
    John W. Howell

    So nice to have Anita writing poetry again. Thank you so much for sharing it.

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    1. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

      I think Anita was as pleased as I was, John…

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      1. John W. Howell Avatar
        John W. Howell

        Win-win 😊

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  2. pensitivity101 Avatar
    pensitivity101

    It’s lovely Jaye.

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    1. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

      Thank you, Di… and Sis is thrilled by all the comments!

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar
        pensitivity101

        Well deserved too.

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  3. Author Jan Sikes Avatar
    Author Jan Sikes

    A beautiful expression!

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    1. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

      Thanks Jan, it was a beautiful moment in the day…

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  4. Violet Lentz Avatar
    Violet Lentz

    Beautiful. Thanks to both of you for sharing it.

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    1. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

      This was unexpected, but really worth sharing, Violet…

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  5. Annette Rochelle Aben Avatar
    Annette Rochelle Aben

    Thank you and Anita for sharing! This is a smile maker!!

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    1. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

      That makes it well worth sharing, Annette…

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  6. Ravindra Kumar Karnani Avatar
    Ravindra Kumar Karnani

    Well frank confession, dont know if I understood the meaning fully. To me the poem is about the human journey through darkness and doubt, searching for meaning and a way back to one’s true self.
    When you added the note that “sister wrote this after a long creative silence, ” so to me the poem also becomes a metaphor for reawakening one’s lost voice or inner light after a period of dormancy.
    Just my 2 cents.

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    1. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

      Your 2 cents are very welcome, Ravindra…

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  7. Darlene Avatar
    Darlene

    It’s a wonderful poem, thank you.

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    1. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

      and wonderful for so many reasons, too, Darlene…

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