Empty Rooms… #Poetry

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Empty Rooms…

I am disappearing with the days, the seasons

My mind no longer holds

the information I need for the future

Too many empty rooms inside my head

Dust, cobwebs, echoing lost moments

No longer can I file thoughts away  

to tell my family when they come to see me

By that time, it has gone

into one of those empty rooms

Where I cannot go

I wonder what happens inside those rooms

Do my thoughts and feelings grow without me there?

I hear a song, and memories come flooding back

I am whole again for a day or two

I shut the door on those empty rooms

With yesterday’s dreams

I look forward to a brighter day…

©AnitaDawes2024


I was thinking of sharing a ‘Look Back at 2024’ post today, but Sis kinda beat me to it with this thought provoking poem. I will be back tomorrow with my post…

We hope you all had a terrific Christmas, despite the weather…


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  1. V.M.Sang Avatar

    This is a wonderful poem. It shows exactly what it’s like to grow old.

    Happy New Year , ladies, and may 2025 bring good fortune.

    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      I am hoping that 2025 brings a little joy to everyone, Vivienne… 💖

  2. Annette Rochelle Aben Avatar

    Thought provoking… exactly! Happy New Year, ladies!!! xx

    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thank you, Annette… and a Happy New Year to you and yours too… 💖

  3. janetweightreed10 Avatar

    A very important poem – thank you. I have to write everything down as thoughts come…which helps enormously:).

    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thank you so much, Janet… and best wishes for the New Year!

  4. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    My mom forgets things. A poignant poem.

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