In The Dark… #Poetry

This one is just Wow! I am speechless…


One slip, that’s all it took

For my reckless soul to be lost in the void

How will I find it, snatch it back?

All I have in my pocket is a marble,

An old fan with low batteries

What chance did I have in the dark?

My pulse racing, my heart flickering,

like a light bulb about to go out.

Waves of thought accompanied by the chanting

of an old spell remembered from my childhood.

The words echoed in my head

They held no meaning,

No way to find the void, or enter it

I wondered what happens to a person with no soul?

Right now, all I feel is empty,

A knowing that some part of me is missing

I slip the marble back in my pocket

It might come in handy one day…

©AnitaDawes2024


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  1. dgkaye Avatar

    I felt that. <3

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  2. purplepeninportland Avatar

    This is wonderfully mysterious!

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      I thought so too. My sister definitely has a way with words…

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  3. Sue Dreamwalker Avatar

    A great poem very descriptive, one feels the void

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thank you, Sue. I loved Anita’s poem too…

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  4. Darlene Avatar

    Incredible. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Glad you enjoyed the poem, Darlene…

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  5. Annette Rochelle Aben Avatar

    Clever, quite clever

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thanks, Annette. Anita is glowing!

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