Set in Ice… #Poetry #TheSundayWhirl #Wordle642

Image by Sergio Cerrato – Italia from Pixabay

Set in Ice

Surfacing from a deep sleep

The room I slept in

felt colder than the North Pole

There was a risk of getting frostbite

As I watched, my breath spins in circles

around the room, beads of ice lace the glass,

obscuring my view from the window

Retrieving the milk from outside

felt like walking on a slippery ice rink.

The top of the milk had pushed its way

out of the bottle like a cream lolly.

Bearskins hung stiff, frozen on the line.

Life here could be brutal.

If you had eyes to see, there is a thread of beauty

running through this unforgiving land

Set in ice, pixie faces smile back at you…

©AnitaDawes2024


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  1. Susi Bocks Avatar

    Excellent use of all the words. What a story!

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        You’re welcome!

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  2. purplepeninportland Avatar

    Beautiful imagery and photos!

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      Thank you, we are glad you enjoyed it!

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  3. Ron Avatar

    Beautiful poem and image.

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  4. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Such a vivid picture of winter when so close to nature. I love the pixie faces. :-) Beautiful poem, Anita.

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      We thank you for your feedback, Diana… 💖

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    Within reading this wonderful poem i also felt the coldness. I hope the next one is about holidays somewhere in the warmer South. ;-) xx Michael

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      I appreciate your comment, Michael…

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