#WRITEPHOTO – Egg

photo courtesy of KL Caley

He could hear the sound of water

echoing through the walls of his shell.

He remembered other sounds

but couldn’t hear them now.

The soft, muffled movements

of his siblings faded away,

and his world grew cold.

Pecking at the wall of his shell,

Was it time to escape?

Try as he might, his feeble pecks

did not release him from his prison.

The sound of water grew louder,

and he felt movement. Time passed,

and there was silence in his world.

Warmth returned, and he pecked again.

Too weak to continue, there was a loud crack.

The broken shell fell away,

he saw his family for the first time.

Bright eyes and soft feathers

welcomed him, and he sighed,

Grateful to be alive and happy…

©JayeMarie2023


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  1. John W. Howell Avatar

    A super poem, Jaye. I always wonder how those chicks make it out. So glad they do.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thanks John. I don’t write a lot of poetry, that’s usually my sisters job, but something about that image got me going!

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  2. Penny Wilson Writes Avatar

    whew! For a minute I was scared for that chick! Well done! :)

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thank you so much, Penny… 💕

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  3. Goff James Avatar

    Great write My Friend. Have a wonderful day.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thanks, I’m glad you liked it, Goff…

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      1. Goff James Avatar

        Pleasure. Happy Writing My Friend.

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