#FlashFiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch…

August 19, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the phrase, “stars in the sand.” Your story can be any genre (or poem) and can use realism or fantasy. It’s a dreamy prompt.

They told me that Egypt, the pyramids
Would be the holiday of a lifetime
Leaving the rain behind
Take off delayed
They forgot to load the luggage
Not a good start
We might have left the rain behind
The black cloud had followed us aboard
The hotel turned out nice, mood lifted
Next morning, with the tour guide
We made our way to the pyramids
Wow! They really are something
Somehow, I got separated from the tour
The sand dunes I found myself on
As beautiful as any painting
That’s when I found three lucky stars in the sand…

© Anita Dawes 2021


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  1. Norah Avatar

    I hope the stars keep the black cloud at bay.

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  3. Charli Mills Avatar

    Mishaps can lead to treasure found. Lovely, Anita!

    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Glad you liked it, Charli!

    2. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Thank you… 💕

  4. Raksha Mitruka Avatar

    Its simply nice 👌. It was great reading it

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