#WhatDoYouSee ~ #KeepItAlive ~ #WDYS ~ #Poetry

What do you see # 65- January 18 2021

Image credit; Simona Sergi @ Unsplash

( For the visually challenged reader, this image shows an envelope hanging by a white tread. In the background there is a house entrance)

I pick up my skirt and run the half mile across the field
To the other side of the village forbidden to me by my father
Where I know Phillipe has hung out his letter to me
His handmade seal, a golden heart with a kiss
The red envelope is for my eyes only
The small brown one for my father, begging for an audience
He will again tell my father how much he loves me
How one day, he will make me his wife
He will be worthy to ask for my hand
I hide my letters where father cannot find them
In our church, the one place he will never set foot in
I give him the small brown envelope to hear another refusal
Over my dead body, he would say
I cry myself to sleep, waiting for the day we can do more
Than steal a few moments alone in our church
Where he will tell me his fortune is almost made
He will stand in from of his King, my father
 and ask for my hand, no longer a pauper…

© Anita Dawes 2021


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  2. John W. Howell Avatar

    A lovely tale well told. Tell Anita thanks, Jaye. Thank you too. 😁

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Our pleasure, John…

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  4. Eliza Waters Avatar

    Poignant longing… thankfully, women have more power now!

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      I suppose we do, most of the time anyway…

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  5. paeansunplugged Avatar

    Beautifully expressed!

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  6. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    What a lovely poem. A fairy tale romance.

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Anita seems to be getting more romantic these days!

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      1. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

        Ha. Yes, she does. Or she’s haunting us.

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  7. Chris Hall Avatar

    Breathless and passionate! You really nailed your heroine :)

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  8. Sadje Avatar

    This is a tender and sweet story. Thank you so much for joining in

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Always a pleasure, Sadje…

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  9. judeitakali Avatar

    Classically romantic, loved the rhythm 🧡

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Thank you, Jude…

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      1. judeitakali Avatar

        My pleasure Jaye

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  10. kittysverses Avatar

    I enjoyed reading this piece of poetry, magical and dramatic. Very beautiful. :)

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Thank you, Kitty…

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      1. kittysverses Avatar

        You are welcome. :)

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        1. thoughtsnlifeblog Avatar

          Nicely written. Lovely story. Great response

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          1. kittysverses Avatar

            Thank you very much, thanks a lot for stopping by. :)

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