Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community ~ #Poetry

November 5: Flash Fiction Challenge

November 5, 2020, prompt:

In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about lost time.

Humans would call me a bad fairy
They don’t know much about my world
I am known as a Too Tak
I need to steal time
In order to feed the hunger inside
Without this, my kind don’t live long
Let’s face it, humans get plenty of time
To lose a little won’t hurt
Half an hour here and hour there
What harm can it do?
They think the clocks are wrong
Running slow or fast
They blame the time loss on bad memory
When my time is done
They get the borrowed time back
As a lost memory…

©anitadawes 2020


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  1. Charli Mills Avatar

    Oh, this gave me a shiver! Native Americans would call this a bad spirit.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      I think they might be right, Charli!

  2. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    This explains so much…

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      It does, doesn’t it?

  3. Zoolon Avatar

    Brilliant ~ George

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, George…

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