Don’t Panic… Let Go!

Did I just grab the tail end of a plane
As it took off?
Am I soaring high above the earth?
How or why I am doing this
I cannot tell
I should not be able to breathe
My body should freeze at this altitude
Yet the air feels soft, gentle
Helping me to hold on
It wants me here to witness
The earth below in all its glory
At the same time
To know how it feels
To be free of all restraints
The clouds brush against my skin
The soft touch of cotton wool
Childhood footsteps
run through my mind
reminding me of mother’s gentle touch
the air pulls me forward
old memories drift away
I can feel my soul rewriting my future
As I let go of the plane…

©anitadawes 2020


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  1. kimbladeswritingblog Avatar

    I love the dreamlike quality of this poem.

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  2. judeitakali Avatar

    Hi Jayne, I just featured this post on my weekly feature here;
    https://wordeologist.wordpress.com/2020/08/15/the-saturday-symphony-6/

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Jude!

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      1. judeitakali Avatar

        My pleasure 🌼

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  3. […] Don’t panic, Let go by Anitadawes – Take an adventure in the clouds and glide on Anita’s sumptuous words. […]

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  4. John W. Howell Avatar

    Yes, l would like to float as well. Thanks, Anita.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      I wonder if it would be any cooler up there…

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      1. John W. Howell Avatar

        Oh yes. Get to 40,000 feet and you get a range of -40 F to -70F. Brrrrr

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        1. jenanita01 Avatar

          From one extreme to another?

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          1. John W. Howell Avatar

            It seems that way.

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  5. judeitakali Avatar

    Ahh, Beautiful and freeing.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Glad you liked it, Jude…

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  6. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Wow. I love this. Beautiful poetry. The last line is stunning.

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  7. Steve Tanham Avatar

    Loved it, Anita. Float gently, land safely…

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