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What do you see # 31 -25 May 2020

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(For visually challenged reader, the image shows a road leading towards a dwelling in the forest. It is hidden in fog and surrounded by tall trees. A light is shining brightly out of the window of the house)

A finger of yellow light shines through the fog

This means life, hidden behind the tall trees

Am I trespassing?

My nosiness answered by a shotgun blast

Lifting the hair on my head

I ran, as if I had sprouted wings on my feet.

Believing myself far enough from danger

I lent against a tall tree,

Letting my body slide to the ground

My breath slowing,

my heart beating in time with fear

I remembered seeing a small cabin through the fog

Why did they shoot at me?

Had it been a warning, or did they take aim?

They could have just asked me to leave

Had they lost the art of communication?

Rested now, I decided to take the long way around

Avoiding any further confrontation.

This was not to be

The yellow light shone in my face

Blinding me to who may be holding it

I felt the sharp end of a needle enter my neck

Then blackness.

On waking, I found myself in my own bed

I had no recollection of the two days that had passed.

Remembering the sting of the needle

Placed my hand where the needle had pierced.

I found a small raised bump

Now I realised the stories about the cabin to be true

I had been taken…

©anita dawes 2020


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  1. msjadeli Avatar

    Creepy! The bright light in your face freaked me out, especially when you thought you had gotten away.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you!

      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome.

  2. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    So creepy! A great take on the prompt. :-)

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Diana, glad you liked it!

  3. Sadje Avatar

    Quite a built up of suspense here Anita. A very well written story.
    Thanks for joining in the challenge

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Glad you liked it, Sadje…

      1. Sadje Avatar

        👌🙏

  4. judeitakali Avatar

    Eerie, I loved this story

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