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Thursday photo prompt: Dance #writephoto

 

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For visually challenged writers, the image shows a pale sun piercing the mists above a green path through a golden field, leading into the centre of a circle of stones.

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They Dance

Our star hung colourless

Unable to pierce the grey mist.

As I walked, the green path

with golden fields flanking my sides

I could feel the loneliness

The empty forgotten dance.

For a moment, I wanted to stop

Walk back leave these grey stones

With their ancient memories.

That thought compelled me

To walk on into the circle of stones.

I could barely make out the bank of growth

along the skyline. The mist hung thick

as I entered the stones

I lost the feeling of loneliness.

Replaced by a knowing

I was waiting for something to happen

No, not something, someone

To come back through the mist.

She came towards me

A dark-haired beauty wearing

a white dress that reached the ground

Her arms held out towards me

Before I left the stone circle

I danced with an angel…

©anitadawes 2020

 

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  1. Lisa Coleman Avatar

    You captured the feeling of being safe once beyond the uncertain path to get there. :)

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Sue Vincent’s prompts always bring out the best of our imagination!

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      1. Lisa Coleman Avatar

        Yes they certainly do. 😊

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  3. willowdot21 Avatar

    Beautiful, hopeful and uplifting 💜

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Willowdot…

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      1. willowdot21 Avatar

        A pleasure 💜

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  4. Christine Bolton Avatar

    This was beautiful 💕🙂

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Christine…

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  6. judeitakali Avatar

    This is so beautiful. Gorgeous verse, I really loved the ending

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thanks, Jude…

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  7. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Wonderful, Anita. You really caught the mood here x

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you so much, Sue…

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