Hidden Places… #Writephoto ~ Torrent

Thursday photo prompt: Torrent #writephoto

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Image by scvincent.com

For visually challenged writers, the image shows a waterfall, its peat-coloured waters cascading over a rocky ledge and surrounded by trees.

Hidden Places

The beating heart of the water can be heard

in the torrent rushing over the small fall

Following the white foam footsteps into darkness

I wonder if this is a gateway to another world?

As the sound of thundering water

Disappears behind me

The sudden silence, deafening

awakes my senses.

I hear bird song unfamiliar to me

They perch, watching me

Bright colours flashing in the sunlight

They are not from my world.

Should I have followed the torrent of water

Kept my feet firmly in my own world

Will my feet walk there again

Or am I to stay here in wonderland?

©anitadawes 2020

For Sue Vincent’s #writephoto prompt, #torrent


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  1. forgottenmeadows Avatar

    lovely poem!

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you!

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  4. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Water has a way of leading us to magical places. Beautiful poem, Anita.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Diana… Water itself is magical…

  5. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Beautiful, Anita. I think I would have to explore… ;)

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Sue… We would be right behind you!

      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        I thought you might ;)

  6. thelonelyauthorblog Avatar

    Perfect words to go along with the image.
    Happy weekend.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Drew… Hope you’re doing well…

      1. thelonelyauthorblog Avatar

        Yes, I am. Thanks.

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