#Writephoto ~ Storm #Poetry

Thursday photo prompt: Storm #writephoto

 

Image by scvincent.com

For visually challenged writers, the image shows stormy sky above a ruined tower, perched above earthen banks and ditches.

Another lovely #writephoto prompt from Sue Vincent. Here’s our take on her image – and if you want to give the prompt a go, head over to her site and link your post to hers, or leave a link in the comments:

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Storm

Thoughts etched in silence

Fingernails on a blackboard

Words screaming to be set free

Grey, unwashed linen clouds

Above rusting chains

Inside a broken tower

Where the screaming never stops

Their pain mixed in mortar

This decades old tower holds its own

Silenced by time forgot…

©anitadawes 2020

 

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  2. joylennick Avatar

    Evocative imagery; I felt the angst! x

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thanks, Joy…

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  4. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Wonderful! I love the echoes of the screams.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Definitely!

  5. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Eerie and quite hainting…

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Sue…

      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        I do wish my fingers worked better at the moment though ;)

        1. jenanita01 Avatar

          Same here. I think they must be affected by all the malfunctions…

          1. Sue Vincent Avatar

            Wouldn’t surprise me at all ;)

  6. Suzette Benjamin Avatar

    Wonderful poetry “grey unwashed linen clouds.. “– love this beautiful poignant imagery. Thank you!

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Anita its so grateful for your pick up, Suzette…

      1. Suzette Benjamin Avatar

        My pleasure😊💖

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