#Writephoto ~ Choice #Poetry

Thursday photo prompt: Choice #writephoto

 

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Image by scvincent.com

For visually challenged writers, the image shows a winter landscape, with trees by a stream and rough stepping stones across it.

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The blue river runs through high bracken banks

Over ancient moss-covered rocks

Dark trees line the way with long shadows

A peaceful scene you may think.

Take care not to step into the cool water

If you have dark thoughts in mind

The one-eyed soul eater lies hiding

Waiting to take that which belongs to the dark side

His hunger is never quenched, he knows

there are many souls that carry a heavy load

His number must be filled

before despatching his catch

For cleansing, renewal

For the newly born to take their turn

He waits for one who walks the water

Clean, unmarked by time for his own release

When another will take his place…

©anitadawes 2020

 

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  2. Eliza Waters Avatar

    Oooh, this gave me goosebumps! ;)

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Oh dear… she said while grinning… not too badly I hope?

      1. Eliza Waters Avatar

        Just right… :)

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  4. Sue Vincent Avatar

    As dark and brooding as the moors in winter… loved this one, Anita.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Anita sends her thanks and so pleased you liked the poem…

  5. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Oh. so dark and creepy. Love it.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Your comments make our day, Diana…
      BTW, have I asked which WP theme you use, as it’s wonderful and I’m looking to change ours?

      1. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

        My theme is super old and I’m not sure it’s still supported. The features are pretty limited, but I’m used to it. It’s called “Dawn to Dusk” or “Dusk to Dawn”, one of those. :-) Have fun!

        1. jenanita01 Avatar

          Thank you, Diana, I’ll see if I can find it…

  6. Alethea Kehas Avatar

    Love the part, “he waits for the one who walks the water…”

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Yes, I liked that line too… Anita writes some lovely poems…

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