#Keepitalive #Whatdoyousee #Poetry

What do you see # 11 – January 6th, 2020

 

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Time

I have come a long way on liquid light

To find this old castle

Is it the one I’m looking for?

Will this burning path lead me

Out of its dark walls

To a world outside I remember

Lush green trees, rolling hills

My home beside the sea

Will it be as it once was?

Companionship, love and laughter

Will I finally be able to place the sword

Back in his hands where it belongs?

Are they still there, or must I journey on?

To find the Lady of the Lake

To throw the sword again

into its dark watery world

to wait for time to turn back…

©anitadawes

 

It’s lonely out here in the inter-ether…Talk to me people!


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  1. msjadeli Avatar

    Mysterious, it sounds like part of a legend.

  2. BeckiesMentalMess.wordpress.com Avatar

    Such a tremendous piece!

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Beckie…

      1. BeckiesMentalMess.wordpress.com Avatar

        The pleasure was all mine!

  3. judeitakali Avatar

    This is so magical. How I loved the “liquid light” and it captures the image so well. *wink on the lady of the lake ref.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thanks, Jude…

      1. judeitakali Avatar

        youre very welcome

  4. Violet Lentz Avatar

    You words bring to light the deep longings that I believe are interspersed in shadow in the photo. brilliant take!

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Violet…

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  6. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Another amazing poem, Anita. I love it when you get all mystical. :-) Your talent shines.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you so much, Diana. Anita loves your comments…

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