#Flashfiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

November 14: Flash Fiction Challenge

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November 14, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using storm windows. It can be literal on a house, but also consider other portals, even spaceships or submarines. Can you make it into something new or build a story around something historical? Go where the prompt leads!

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In England we don’t have storm windows

We have triple double glazing

Which distorts the view outside something terrible

They’re only good for keeping out the cold and sound

Looking at the moon at night, you will see three

I can’t imagine needing them for the kind of winds

That sound like an angry animal

Trying to take the house brick by brick

Tornados, snowstorms the size of mountains

Whiting out the familiar, trapping families

In their homes, enforced imprisonment

By the local weather

I watch Chasing Tornados on TV

Wondering how it would feel to be up close…

©anitadawes

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  1. Charli Mills Avatar

    Weather can be so fascinating, Anita.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      It really can. I love the speed in which it can change too…

  2. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    You are braver than I, Anita. I’ll take the triple double glazing and mild winters. :-)

  3. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    I have not noticed the distorting effect when I am in the UK, Anita. I do agree that hurricans and tornadoes are a different monster to cold and sleet.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      When we look at the moon through our double glazed windows, we see three of them.

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