99 word Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

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99 words, no more, no less. It’s a simple constraint, an easy-to-master literary art form, and a powerful writing tool for creatives and entrepreneurs. Writers calibrate the usefulness and beauty of 99-words through weekly flash fiction challenges.

Carrot Ranch is a dynamic online literary community for those practicing craft, reading stories and discussing process. Charli Mills is the lead buckaroo who hosts challenges, guest blogs, and an annual multi-contest called the Flash Fiction Rodeo.

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September 5, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that shows true grit. You can use the phrase or embody the theme. Who or what has true grit? Go where the prompt leads you!

 

True Grit (or Determination)

Over the years I have noticed

How many members of my family

Grit their teeth when trying hard

To achieve their goal

I tend to do this when getting angry

My teeth grit, my jaws clench

Muscles moving, trying not to let out words

I could not take back

I have seen a young woman

Eyes bulging, teeth gritted

Trying desperately to move her car out of harm’s way

A lot of teeth are getting worn down by determination

I did wonder why no one offered to help

Maybe they worried about their teeth

Do you do the same?

©Anita Dawes

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  1. Norah Avatar

    It is a tendency to grit our teeth, isn’t it? I know a few people who grind their teeth in their sleep and have had to have their teeth built up. That’s true grit!

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      I’m guilty of that too, they gave me a plastic guard to wear at night, but I almost choked on it!

      1. Norah Avatar

        I wouldn’t like to have to wear something in my mouth at night. I think I’d choke on it too.

  2. Charli Mills Avatar

    Good observation of the body mechanics of true grit, Anita!

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      So glad you liked it, Charli…

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  4. Mae Clair Avatar

    You put a unique spin on that one, Anita. Nicely done!

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      That’s a lovely way of putting it, Mae…

  5. Joshua G. J. Insole Avatar

    Nicely done! There was something darkly comical about the lines: “I did wonder why no one offered to help / Maybe they worried about their teeth.” There’s a deep meaning there.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Glad you liked it, Joshua…

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