#BlogBattle ~ Stable #Poetry

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This is it! Blog Battle’s Glorious Return

We’ve all heard how writing is a lonely business. Well, I think we’ve all heard it. And if not, now we have. But in the world of the internet, writing doesn’t have to be nearly so isolated a pursuit!

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July 2019 Blog Battle

Our word this month is:

STABLE

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Better than Stable

The doctor is walking towards me

I know what he is going to say

She is stable. It was the same last week

Her mind is hanging on, but where is she?

Lying there with tubes decorating her still body

A strange kind of jewellery I wish she wasn’t wearing

Like an Egyptian mummy with the wrappings taken off

Stable. There should be a better word

I looked it up in the dictionary,

resistant to sudden change

Self-restoring, having no mode of decay,

plus, a lot of stuff about horses.

How am I meant to relay this to my wife?

Who last week found life fun, laughing, dancing?

Singing while hanging out the washing

Before she was spun into a coma by a filthy black car

Stable, is the best they can give me

Reminding me that over two thousand years ago

Jesus Christ was born in a stable

I don’t have a religious bone in my body

Yet I find myself walking to the hospital chapel

I light a candle, asking whoever might hear me

Can you do better than stable?

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  1. Doug Jacquier Avatar

    Really powerful and good to see poetry amongst the entries.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Doug. Glad you liked it…

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  2. aebranson Avatar

    Excellent work! Drew me in immediately. And the way you wrapped it up was quite poignant.

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  4. Stevie Turner Avatar

    Wow, great poem! It’s amazing how we can all come up with different stories and poems when given just one word.

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  5. Gary Avatar

    Now this is impressive. Excellent use of the prompt and applied to a scenario many of us have experienced. I feel your writing gets better each time I visit!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Praise indeed! Thank you, Gary…

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  6. bellabasket Avatar

    Didn’t realise how empty and meaningless the word Stable was until I read your poem.
    Well done

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Bella…

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  7. Lisa R. Palmer Avatar

    Wow! Love this! It certainly packs an emotional punch…

    Well done!! 💕❤️

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Lisa…

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