#Writephoto: Faraway…

Many thanks to Sue Vincent for another lovely #writephopto prompt!

 

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Faraway

I find myself high above the clouds

Passing land and sea

Wishing I could be more than vapour

A mist that falls as rain.

Could someone catch a cup full

To bring me back again?

So many lives remembered

I cannot tell which was mine

Must I keep returning as cloud and rain?

There is no end to a circle I hear you say

Let someone catch a drop from the cloud

With mouth open wide

Before it hits the drain

I will be blessed in time to be born again…

©Anita Dawes

 

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  1. willowdot21 Avatar

    Olive this, it’s right up my street 💜💜

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  2. Jordan Avatar

    Anita, I love this poem. Very creative, each line spirals to the next in loving waves.
    Beautiful!
    Jordan

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you for such lovely comments, Jordan…

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  4. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Exquisite, Anita.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Anita loved that you … so do I!

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  5. stevetanham Avatar

    What a clever theme, Anita. Loved it.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      So kind of you to say that, Steve. We both thank you so much…

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