Nine Gates… #Poetry

 

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The door is open, do not enter

should you be foolish enough to step within

remember these three things

don’t lose the keys as you cannot turn back.

Love all things

Most of all, remember your name

It will carry you through the nine gates of hell.

The first is a three-mile swim

to the island, find the key to gate two

where time slows.

You must keep the same pace as before

think not of what is within, nor touch his skin.

Gate 3 is not so tough

pay no heed to what you hear.

Gate 4 is a bit sticky

Push hard, you will fall right in.

Pick not the flowers nor smell their sweetness.

Gate 5 will tell you lies about the ones you love

Gate six, time will tick louder in here

Do not let it make you rush.

Gate 7 will turn your mind around

do not lose direction.

Gate eight, no matter how you thirst

do not drink from the well of forgetfulness.

Gate nine stands the gatekeeper

He will ask you for the eight keys.

Do not worry that he is blind, he sees you

He will hand you the ninth key

here you must speak your name.

Let not all else be lost in flame

Remember the path behind you

for you will walk its length again…

AAAAA


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  1. Jennie Avatar

    Excellent!

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you…

      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome.

  2. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    What a cool poem, Anita. A nightmarish tale.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Anita thanks you, Diana., as do I… I thought it was brilliant!

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you…

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