I Wish… #Poetry



The river knows its way home
The bee knows how to make honey
As I walk towards the river, a bee stung my arm
Instantly, I wanted to give the bee his sting back
I wanted to take back every angry word I had spoken
and shoot them into space
Most of all, I want to return the bee sting
Unfortunately, there’s no winding life back
I keep the bees sting in a box
to remind me that life is fragile
For some it can be too short
like the bee that stung me…

©AnitaDawes2025


a sad poem from my sister. Why do bees have to die if they sting you?

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  1. Susi Bocks Avatar

    Even if their sting is a waste, that is their life cycle. They died an honorable death.

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  2. Chris Hall Avatar

    Aww, poor bees…

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  3. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    A poem that made me think about the short lives of bees. Their sting costs them their lives. True of people sometimes too, though many can just keep on stinging. I think I prefer bees.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Me too, Diana… thanks for commenting!💕🐝

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  4. Annette Rochelle Aben Avatar

    Right? I used to think it was horrid that the bees who have stung me gave their lives for that was their lot. Me? The first sting, I suffered an allergic reaction requiring a doctor to remedy. The next? I merely applied lavender oil to the sting, and I was fine. I carried on and the bees because compost.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      It’s a good job that bees are placid, not like those wasps!

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  5. Esther Chilton Avatar

    I always find it so sad about bees.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      I also feel sorry for the bumble bees, they are so big and their wings are so small, I am forever rescuing one when they run out of steam!

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  6. pensitivity101 Avatar

    It is sad about bees, yet wasps can sting you again and again (I’ve been on the receiving end). Hubby and I try to help the tired bees we see, but sometimes they are too exhausted and close to their expiry time. Our back lawn is pocked with tiny craters for ground bees, but they are all empty as our soil is clay based, so doesn’t drain well.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      I like to help the bumblies when I find them on the ground, I never thought they could be dying…

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        We try to take them to a flower where they can rest or feed. I’ve got some funny looks helping bees.

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        1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

          They already think I’m crazy, so nothing surprises my lot anymore, Di…

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  7. Violet Lentz Avatar

    A sad quandary for sure. makes you wonder if our response to being stung is warranted…

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      just as well that bees are not looking to sting us, unlike those blooming wasps!

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  8. deteremineddespitewp Avatar

    Beautiful compassionate poem, I doubt if I would have been so forgiving.
    Tragedy for bees, the sting is barbed and efficient for insect to insect defence however this barb will get caught in the thicker skin of some animals, mammals being the classic example.

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