Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

FreeFall… #Poetry

FreeFall

I like the sound of the singing butterfly, with airy dreams falling free
Rain so delicate you cannot see it, or feel its touch
Where rivers flow with swollen dreams, 
waiting to be caught in a fisherman’s net
The golden catch he carries home to feed his family
When the first taste of a dream touches their lips, 
together they can make their dreams come true, 
with homemade wine.
Remembering to leave some for the fairy king and queen
Give yourself the chance to hear the song of the butterfly
Take a leap to catch your dream…

©AnitaDawes2025

A brand new poem from Anita! Not her usual style, but I love it! I don’t remember my dreams, so I must make do with daydreams…

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  1. Susi Bocks Avatar
    Susi Bocks

    Dreams are made up of hope!

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    1. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

      That they are, Susi…

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      1. Susi Bocks Avatar
        Susi Bocks

        :)

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  2. Annette Rochelle Aben Avatar
    Annette Rochelle Aben

    I love this

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      Thanks Annette… 💕

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  3. D.L. Finn, Author Avatar
    D.L. Finn, Author

    This is so delicate and beautiful!

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      I don’t know how my sister does it, but I’m glad she does! It is lovely… 💕

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  4. Esther Chilton Avatar
    Esther Chilton

    I love Anita’s poem. It’s good to try a new style.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      I thought it most unusual for Anita, but I love whatever she writes… 💕💕

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  5. Grant at Tame Your Book Avatar
    Grant at Tame Your Book

    Thanks, Jaye, and I loved Anita’s poem!

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      I loved it too, I hope she comes up with more like this…

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  6. Chris Hall Avatar
    Chris Hall

    Really lovely!

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      Thanks Chris, long time no see, how are you?

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      1. Chris Hall Avatar
        Chris Hall

        Very much better, and thank you. I’m pretty slow still, but moving in the right direction. More posting now (smiling).

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        1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar
          Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

          You sound like me, Chris. I am still improving, but some days are not so good. I’m just glad to be returning to normal, even if it is slow…

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  7. Violet Lentz Avatar
    Violet Lentz

    This reminds me take things a little less seriously and enjoy the song of the butterfly… lovely.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      an unusual theme from my sister, but quite delightful. I loved it… 💕💕

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  8. SRIKANTH Avatar
    SRIKANTH

    A beautifully woven tapestry of delicate imagery and hopeful magic. It reminds us that dreams are both to be caught and shared.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      amd a timely reminder, Srikanth, thank you…

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