The Beginning… #NewStory #MysteryFiction

Today, I put pen to paper and began to write Swan Song, my next David Snow story.

As usual, I was nervous; knowing I must start well almost terrified me.

Even though I know it doesn’t matter if it’s brilliant or not, it could all change in a heartbeat as I go along.

That problem first chapter might end up being scrapped, cut to ribbons or placed elsewhere. So, at this stage I need to get all the words on the paper.

I can’t help thinking this new plot should be good, as I am very fond of David Snow. He is like a big brother, and I always wanted one of those. We have been through some tough times together, and I would hate to disappoint him. After all, I have his reputation and my own to consider, don’t I?

Neither of us is getting any younger, so there is that to consider too.

I know this man like the back of my hand, but I have just realised that there is a very real risk that I might forget to tell the reader enough, assuming that they know him as well as I do.

My favourite David Snow story has to be Out of Time, in which he tries one last time to help Kate Devereau escape the clutches of her violent tormenter, her ex-husband.

Kate Devereau wakes up in hospital

unable to speak or move after a brutal attack by her ex-husband.

Her brain has shut down, refusing to remember her dark and disturbing past.

A past that conceals a web of painful secrets.

Can she gradually piece her shattered life back together?

Or will she discover that her nightmare is far from over?

Can the Snowman save Kate, somehow?

A brilliant Review

Fast-paced thriller

In this thriller, Kate Devereau wakes up in the hospital without any memory of the violence she’s endured. Nor does she remember any of the people in her life, including a past lover Michael who wants a second chance, or her ex-husband Jack, a sociopathic killer trying to do her in. David Snow is the detective tasked with her case. All four of these characters share alternating points of view in the story.

Kate’s character was the most interesting to me as she’s the one most in the dark. As the reader, I knew more about what happened than she did, but there were many tidbits of information I learned along with her. The author makes no secret that Jack Holland is the murderer and intends to finish the job he started. Jack is completely evil, but the other characters are nuanced and easy to relate to.

The pace moves along well, the tension is good, and I finished this book in two sittings. There aren’t many twists and turns; instead, the return of Kate’s memory provides a counterpoint to John’s increasing menace and David’s attempts to learn the truth. Recommended to readers of thrillers who enjoy a fast-paced story…


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  1. John W. Howell Avatar

    My unsolicited advice is to quit thinking and just write the story

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      The first chapter was a bit rubbish, John and this was disappointing… but I’m back at it now!

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      1. John W. Howell Avatar

        I know you have your own style, but I just write the stuff without looking back. I count on rewrites to find he rubbish. I don’t rewrite until I complete the first draft. I may have trash at the end but at least I have a rough draft to work on.

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        1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

          That is pretty much what happens here too, John. But I like to think I have started well…

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  2. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Just get the story out, Jaye. I know it will come together in the end. Happy Writing!

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Thanks for the encouragement, Diana. I must be getting old or something!

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      1. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

        I can relate. Writing will keep your brain young though!!! :-D

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        1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

          I used to think that, Diana, but my brain is feeling quite ancient these days. I am hoping that writing this new story will get it back into shape!

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  3. Author Jan Sikes Avatar

    I hate that raven of doubt that perches on my shoulder, Jaye. Shoo him away and write your story! Great review!

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Yes, that was one of the best my books have ever received, which should inspire me to get writing!

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  4. Darlene Avatar

    A terrific review for Out of Time! Good luck on the latest WIP. Sounds like you are on a roll.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      That is the plan, Darlene, before the brain cells get too old!

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  5. V.M.Sang Avatar

    One I haven’t read. It sounds a good read.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      My favourite David Snow book, Vivienne… 📘

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