Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

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   Steve Tanham

   November 28, 2023

   Dramatic stuff, Anita! Very testing, that kind of ‘delirium’…

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      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      November 28, 2023

      My sister nearly binned this one, thinking it wasn’t any good… I’m glad she didn’t…

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   deteremineddespitewp

   November 28, 2023

   Very evocative. This poem lays bare as a falsehood the old platitude:

                                   Stick and stones
                                   May break my bones
                                   Words will never hurt me
   

   Words have their own power, for better or for worse.

   The use of the nightmare imagery is very striking ‘sheets soaked’ resulting from ‘Whispers become screams’ . Your own strong and vivid use of ‘Words’.

   Well done.

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      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      November 28, 2023

      Thank you for such a wonderful comment!

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         deteremineddespitewp

         November 28, 2023

         My pleasure.
         😀

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   Darlene

   November 27, 2023

   Awesome poem. Thanks!

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      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      November 27, 2023

      Thanks Darlene, your support is wonderful…

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