Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Order made Visible… #Poetry

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Counting dust particles in a sunbeam
Order made visible
Lack of concentration, the numbers slip
Look again, is the dust really there?
Invisible fingers touch the air
Searching the universe for the new, the unknown
Inside the dark space where stars are born
On into infinity, something is out there
Numbered by the Galaxies we spin in…


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  1. D. Wallace Peach Avatar
    D. Wallace Peach

    Loved this mystical poem, Anita. Beautifully penned. Order and chaos go hand in hand and somehow it all makes sense.

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      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Somehow, it really does, Diana…

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    OIKOS™- Art, Books & more

    Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.

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  3. Teagan Riordain Geneviene Avatar
    Teagan Riordain Geneviene

    A moment of synchronicity… I was just writing a story involving chaos and order. Anyway, this is gorgeous. Thanks so much for sharing it. Hugs on the wing.

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      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Anita’s poem certainly had me thinking. Glad you liked it, Teagan…

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  4. Jan Sikes Avatar
    Jan Sikes

    Deep and beautiful!

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      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      a lovely comment, Jan. We thank you!

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