Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

June 3, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story being leashed. Is it literal or metaphorical? Who or what is leashed. How does it set the tone? Go where the prompt leads!

Unchained by the skin I wear
The way I think always gets me
in so much trouble with other people
I don’t feel the way they do about things
I am the odd one out
There are days I feel so bad
about being leashed to myself
It is lonely, even with family
They do not agree with half the things I say
They agree with each other well enough
Most of the time I must pretend
Hide my true self from them
The others, as I have come to call them
For now, the leash holds me tight…

© Anita Dawes


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  1. Leashed « Carrot Ranch Literary Community Avatar

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  2. Charli Mills Avatar

    This hits me in the heart, Anita. It reminds me of the veterans who are not adjusted to civilian life and feel leashed by their own differences and way of thinking. As PTSD and TBIs “age” they do unravel and become unleashed.

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Nobody should feel leashed, Charli…

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  3. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    What a creative take on the image, Anita. Sad and a touch scary. What will happen when the leash comes off?!

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar

      Best not, I think. (I speak from experience)

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  4. harmonykentonline Avatar

    Great take on the prompt, Anita :)

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