Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge…

#TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 211, #Abhanga, or #PoetsChoice

WELCOME TO TANKA TUESDAY!

Anita Dawes Crazy Etheree

Stone monsters’ gargoyles smiles.
Night that never ends.
Slow morning light
Wrinkled sheets
Cold hands
Touch
Pale
Thinking
Brain cracking
Storm clouds calling
Rainfall flood warning
Small dark gargoyle smiling
War in heaven raging
Stone monsters waiting
Armour plated
army waits.
Biting
Souls
Black
Magic
makes its stand.
There to take all.
Heavens light has more
War raging until dawn…

© Anita Dawes 2021

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  1. Smorgasbord - Variety is the Spice of Life. Avatar
    Smorgasbord – Variety is the Spice of Life.

    Crazy works so well and love it Anita…♥

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar
      Books & Bonsai

      Thank you, Sally…

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  2. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen M. Chesebro

    Anita! This is wonderful crazy! I love the dark and light elements you wove together. Excellent! <3

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar
      Books & Bonsai

      We both thank you for loving it, Colleen!

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      1. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen M. Chesebro

        You’re most welcome. <3

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  3. Susi Bocks Avatar
    Susi Bocks

    And the form is very unique. Loved it!

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  4. D. Wallace Peach Avatar
    D. Wallace Peach

    Oooh. I liked this. I love the crazy etheree.

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    1. Books & Bonsai Avatar
      Books & Bonsai

      I loved it too… Anita loves doing these!

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      1. D. Wallace Peach Avatar
        D. Wallace Peach

        So creative!

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