Muse less…

Diana Peach shared a lovely post the other day, about an interesting conversation she had with one of her muses. We have all been invited to share our own experiences…

I wasn’t surprised to find Samuel, my strange muse/mentor sitting in my office that afternoon.

The house was quiet, Anita was having a nap. I had planned to spend time on the WIP, but I already knew I would be wasting my time.

Summoning up the ghost of a smile, I wondered what I was in for this time. He never came just to talk about the weather.

“I’m surprised you can still smile, Jaye, with everything that has been happening in your world. I do not need to ask how you are, or Anita for that matter, as I have been observing you both for weeks.”

I breathe a sigh of relief and slowly sink into my chair. Here, at least, might I find some practical sympathy and advice?

“Now, there’s not much I can do about outside influences, but putting your writing back on track should help, as I have always found this to be a great help in my own life. For a start, your latest work in progress has been on a back burner for far too long. The secret of getting ahead is getting started and I am glad to see that you are making a start. But … your character ARCs need work, and your main character needs an ally. I also think you have the wrong point of view and at least one misplaced character.”

He proceeded to list everything that was wrong with my current WIP. Most of which made perfect sense, as usual. His comments uplifted me, and my depression retreated into the next room. My head bursting with fresh ideas, I just had to write them down.

I stopped writing and looked up to thank him, but he had gone, leaving just the faint memory of pipe tobacco smoke and the memory of his snowy moustache…

When I first started writing, people often spoke about their muses. I didn’t seem to have one or understand what they were going on about. I sometimes heard that Jiminy Cricket voice in my head but didn’t think that was what they meant. Anyway, that voice only ever told me what not to do, so not much help really.

I have had to be stubbornly independent for most of my life, always finding it difficult to accept criticism advice, so assumed I didn’t need a muse and quite happy without one.

So early in 2019, when I wrestled with Silent Payback, Samuel came to see me, and I finally had me a muse of my own. You can read about that meeting here… https://atomic-temporary-43815775.wpcomstaging.com/2018/11/19/jayes-journal-an-unexpected-visitor/

He only visits when he knows I need sorting out, and I often think of messing up, just for a visit…

© Jaye Marie 2020


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  1. Meet the Muse Wrap Up | Myths of the Mirror Avatar
  2. Bette A. Stevens Avatar

    Love it! Thanks for sharing, Jaye…

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  3. Liz Gauffreau Avatar

    You are fortunate indeed to have Samuel Clemons as your muse!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      I always apreciate his help…

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  4. V.M.Sang Avatar

    It seems he paid you a visit just when you needed it. I’m glad he turned up for Silent Payback, too. I enjoyed that one.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      I don’t get to see him much, but he always seems to know when I’m stuck!

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  5. balroop2013 Avatar

    A muse that keeps criticizing is the best one, I feel. I like Samuel, he sounds like a true mentor.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      I wish he would visit more often, but I suspect he is busy helping a lot of people…

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  6. wordsfromanneli Avatar

    Samuel sounds like a good writing friend. I wouldn’t mind a visit from him.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      He loves to help, maybe you could ask him?

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  7. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    Samuel sounds like a wise muse, Jaye. He knows your temperament and understands when to keep silent and when to speak. Wonderful!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Not sure if you’re supposed to love your muse, but I do!

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      1. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

        I love my muse, Jaye! She has been with me for a long time. I wish to spend more time with her. ☺️

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  8. Darlene Avatar

    The perfect muse. Lucky you!!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      He always turns up when needed!

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  9. robertawrites235681907 Avatar
    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      So do I, Robbie…

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  10. Writing to Freedom Avatar

    What a wonderfully unique and helpful muse. Kudos Jaye and thanks for adding to our motley muse review!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you so much!

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  11. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
    Back to the muse posts. How would you like to have Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain) as you muse? I hope you enjoy meeting Jaye Marie’s muse. <3

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Glad you liked my muse post, Diana…

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      1. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

        I loved it, Jaye. So creative. You have a wonderful muse. <3

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        1. jenanita01 Avatar

          Reading about all of yours, Diana, I am thinking of hiring a live-in muse for all the day to day stuff!

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          1. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

            Lol. We haven’t had a blogging muse show up here yet. That muse would be very helpful!

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  12. Widdershins Avatar

    That was a very polite butt-kick. :)

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      My muse is always the perfect gentleman…

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  13. John W. Howell Avatar

    I enjoyed your conversation with Samual, Jaye. Sounds like he is a good pal.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      He gives great advice!

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  14. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Awww. A lovely conversation with your muse, Jaye. They really do help us sort out our writing, and I notice the advice is usually spot on. How wonderful to have Twain was your muse too! You go for the best, huh? Thanks so much for playing. I have your post queued up for a reblog! <3 <3

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Glad you liked my story, Diana…

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