Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge

Colleen’s 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 187 #PhotoPrompt

Sally Cronin provided the photo for this month’s photo challenge:

I
Should have
Held her more
Loved her better
She ran far from me
Held by a lobster pot
golden mermaid waits freedom
This I must give back to her now
Together we live beneath the waves
I will hold her more, love her much better…

©anitadawes 2020

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  1. willowdot21 Avatar
    willowdot21

    I love the depth of this 💜

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you!

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        willowdot21

        A pleasure 💜

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    Smorgasbord – Variety is the Spice of Life.

    That is beautiful Anita..really drew me in…xx

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      jenanita01

      Thank you so much, Sally!

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    judeitakali

    This is beautiful and hopeful. That lucky second chance to do it right

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      jenanita01

      Thank you, Jude!

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        judeitakali

        My pleasure 🌼💛

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