#Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

June 11: Flash Fiction Challenge

June 11, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story deep waters. It can be literal or metaphorical. Think of a place and person and situation. Explore. Bathe. Renew. Go where the prompt leads!


Forgotten by the people they had made
They came from a timeless place
Cold, hollow, brittle
I hoped they would not speak
For fear my bones would break
Already I am fading from this world
I heard a soft voice take my hand
You have fallen into a pit of despair
Let me pull you out…
I felt myself reaching for something
For something I could not see
The sea had swallowed me
Dashing my body against sharp rocks
Reaching my hand above the waves
Mind and body pulled together as one
I was no longer treading deep water…

©anitadawes 2020


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  1. Deep Water « Carrot Ranch Literary Community Avatar

    […] Deep Waters by Anita Dawes […]

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  2. Charli Mills Avatar

    Renewal comes with a hand up. Nice one, Anita!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Charlie…

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