Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

#Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge

Colleen’s 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 171, #SpecificForm

 

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Fairground

Bright sun shining

Coloured balloons on string

Ghost train full of fear stands waiting

Step in

Goldfish

Glass bowl swimming

Money paid, take your chance

Sweet candyfloss to be eaten

Tuck in

©anitadawes 2020

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  1. cathleentownsend Avatar
    cathleentownsend

    Very nice. It was just a few words, but it really brought the feeling of a fair to me. I spent all my money one time unsuccessfully trying to win a goldfish. Ahh, the memories…. : )

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Where would we be without our memories?

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  2. teamfollowthrough Avatar
    teamfollowthrough

    I imagine being there! Lovely

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  3. D. Wallace Peach Avatar
    D. Wallace Peach

    Well done, Anita. It’s an interesting form and you make it look easy.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      No one is more surprised than me, but Anita loves doing them!

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