May 9: Flash Fiction Challenge ~ Growing Old… #Poetry

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May 9, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about growing older. It can be humorous, dark or poignant. It can be true or total fiction. It can be fine wine or an old fossil. Go where the prompt leads!

 

 

I don’t look in the mirror these days, because there is a road map where my face used to be.

Time makes strange marks on all of us, some you cannot see.

From my window, I have watched my neighbours grow old. Two that used to walk to town, now in wheelchairs. One used to pedal his bike everywhere, now uses a stroller.

We are shrinking back to childhood.

Others I have watched through nine months, waiting to produce new life. Now that same child walks beside her mother on her way to school.

 I watch life go by…

AAAAA


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  1. Charli Mills Avatar

    The life observer. Great concepte, shrinking back to childhood.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      This was easy to write, as we are currently doing it!

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  2. galaxywanderer89 Avatar

    Hi, thanks for the prompt. I’m new here, so I don’t know how to link my post here, so I’m just gonna leave it here, https://ashowerofmoonlightandstardust.wordpress.com/2019/05/11/growing-old/. :)

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      You have to link to the Carrot Ranch, as the prompt came from them…

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      1. galaxywanderer89 Avatar

        Hi, thanks ! I’ll do that :)

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